devilssaint
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I can still hear the echoes cheering my name
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Post by devilssaint on Sept 22, 2014 20:39:01 GMT
Alright, I won't lie. I want Alex Arren to start as a face then turn heel in a couple of shows. That being said, I have no idea how I want to run him as a face knowing that I am turning him heel. So below is my most recent promo. Feedback is appreciated. A Moment From Wrestling History |
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wwjbcd
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Portlandius Madness Maximus
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Post by wwjbcd on Sept 22, 2014 22:07:06 GMT
I wish you would have kept that to yourself, so we could all have been surprised when it happened. Besides that, I was confused why the promo would have potentially pissed anyone off. All that notwithstanding, it was good stuff, and it makes one want to see more from this duo!
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devilssaint
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Post by devilssaint on Sept 23, 2014 0:57:35 GMT
Just due to the use of Taylor "Wallstreet" McCallister and all of the characters named in the promo. I can see how under a certain light people could take my usage of the characters negatively. Also, as I said above, I really have no idea how I want to run him as a face prior to the turn.
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Smart
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Post by Smart on Sept 27, 2014 14:42:30 GMT
I enjoy the character of William Bekowsky. An old veteran talking frankly about the "good old days" makes for an interesting manager, and I look forward to seeing what kind of dynamic he has with Alex Arren.
That said, I'm not sure why you're having a guy talk about actual booking in a promo. "By the way wrestling's predetermined" doesn't seem like a good way to hype up a wrestler. An e-fed shoot interview can be an entertaining concept, I'm certainly not opposed to the idea, but I'm not sure what purpose it serves in this context.
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devilssaint
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I can still hear the echoes cheering my name
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Post by devilssaint on Oct 7, 2014 21:01:07 GMT
The Assad AftermathAlright, I think I am coming into my own with this character now. I request some harsh, but constructive criticism on my latest rp. Thank you all.
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so quickly so sad!