wwjbcd
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Portlandius Madness Maximus
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Post by wwjbcd on Sept 17, 2014 2:30:55 GMT
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Smart
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Post by Smart on Sept 18, 2014 14:11:14 GMT
Entertaining as always. Your sense of humor works really well with JBC's post-MSW insanity. You can put him in absurd situations and have it make sense since, well, JBC has no sense. You could have pretty much anything happen and I'd roll with it. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!
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Post by Chris Williams on Sept 18, 2014 15:11:06 GMT
I very much agree with "The Dickface" Daniel Smart on this one . JBC really can do no wrong in-character in my eyes, as I'm a major mark for his story and him at this point. You wrote the dialogue extremely well, showcasing the descent into madness for JBC, easily changing character/personalities on a whim. The narrative supported it 100% as well, and I really enjoyed the points throughout where you "broke the fourth wall", almost as if to reinforce the fact that the narrative is going just as crazy as JBC. Really well done!
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wwjbcd
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Portlandius Madness Maximus
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Post by wwjbcd on Sept 21, 2014 3:23:35 GMT
Thanks so much for the positive words! Hopefully I don't blow it and get stale and boring.
Anyway, if you go back to the initial link, you'll find parts three and four are up, meaning the four-part saga has come to an end! Did you notice I posted each piece two days apart?
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